My Dad
by Timmy Light
My dad is my hero.
My dad used to be to a cool marine.
My dad is the best dad ever.
He is amazing.
One time we went fishing
we caught a humongous FISH
My dad is great because
he is fun to play with,
he helps me with homework
and building legos,
He helps me with soccer.
THE END!
38 Comments
Tmmy
4/5/2013 11:10:57 pm
This poem made me feel happy.
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Trey
4/7/2013 10:23:13 am
I liked this poem because of the way that Timmy expressed the activity's that he does with his dad.
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Timmy
4/17/2013 12:23:48 am
Thank you.
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Morgan
4/7/2013 10:28:31 am
This poem made me feel really happy because it brought back good memories with my dad when I was in second grade.
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Timmy
4/17/2013 12:26:27 am
Nice
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Jessica
4/7/2013 10:12:59 pm
lt makes me fee happy. Because my dad helps me a lot.
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Timmy
4/17/2013 12:28:15 am
Did you mean feel happy .My dad helps me.
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Emily
4/7/2013 10:13:56 pm
It makes me feel good because it is a very nice poem about his dad.
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Timmy
4/17/2013 12:30:16 am
Cool!!!!!
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Gabi
4/8/2013 01:13:56 am
This poem made me feel sad because I don't have a dad.
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Timmy
4/17/2013 12:31:47 am
Im sorry.
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Chase
4/8/2013 01:14:18 am
This poem made me feel thankful because his dad served our country.
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Timmy
4/17/2013 12:33:20 am
Thank you
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Ethan
4/8/2013 01:14:33 am
I like it.
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Gus
4/8/2013 01:15:35 am
It looks like you got a graet dad Timmy.My dad was in the airforce
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Timmy
4/17/2013 12:34:33 am
Cool
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May
4/8/2013 01:15:53 am
It made me happy!
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Tessa
4/8/2013 01:15:53 am
It made me feel happy because of so much stuff you and your dad do.
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Tessa
4/11/2013 07:26:47 am
And Timmy if he wasn't your dad then how would you feel?
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Timothy
4/17/2013 12:35:15 am
Cool
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Carson
4/8/2013 01:16:08 am
It made me feel happy because my dad is exly the same way.
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Jadyn
4/8/2013 01:16:09 am
A big fish and how big was the fish?
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Masun
4/8/2013 01:16:20 am
I like build Legos to.
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Breana
4/8/2013 01:16:28 am
I love the poem.
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Sequoia
4/8/2013 01:16:35 am
It made me feel happy because this is how I think I would feel if I had a dad. Also were did you go to cach the fish
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marcus
4/8/2013 01:16:43 am
What kind of fish wos it?
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andy
4/8/2013 01:16:53 am
it is nice powm
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marie
4/8/2013 01:17:02 am
He makes me feel awsome because its about his dad.
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Saman
4/8/2013 01:17:25 am
When you said my dad helps me with homework does he read it to you?
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Louie
4/8/2013 01:17:47 am
this poem made me fele sad because I barely see my dad. what tipe of fish did you cach?
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casey
4/8/2013 01:17:59 am
this poum is graet ti is grettimmy
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Isaac
4/8/2013 01:18:08 am
I like it because is about your dad
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Lilly
4/8/2013 01:18:21 am
I like this poem because Timmy tells what his dad did.
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Maya
4/8/2013 01:18:49 am
This poem makes me feel save because it holds me whith good memories.
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Pamela
4/12/2013 11:58:22 pm
This poem makes me think of my father. It makes me remember all the happy times I had with my dad.
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Rebecca (Timmy's Mom)
4/15/2013 03:59:14 am
This poem makes me feel happy and proud of both Timmy and his Dad!
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Glenn (Timmy's Dad)
4/15/2013 05:49:09 am
This poem makes me feel loved by a very special boy...Thank You Timmy!
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Hope
4/17/2013 01:34:07 pm
hi
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